the browser embed is broken, but i was able to read it from downloading it. this was a WILD ride. like good lord. i do feel as though the ending was a bit abrupt, as well as the switch from the training camp to the twist, (although to be completely fair, the former can easily just be summed up to the format, so i suppose its just personal taste.) but overall this was very very lovely..... i loved the fluff/happy stuff lol, and n8 choosing her own name was so heartwarming...... n8 and her friends were so sweet..... very fucked up and tragic. also mb for deadnaming her i just dont wanna spoil ppl </3 you did the journal format very well!!!!!!! i hope her and her mistress can live a happy life.........
OH YEAH ALSO!!!!! was the book n53 was reading a reference to something specific? i assume not but i just remembered some book with a similiar premise i know about and its on the tip of my tongue but i CANNOT remember it. sorry if i sound insane. also n69 being the one moaning at night was so funny
This was beautiful! The backgrounds were lovely and well-chosen, I thought you leveraged the epistolary format to give us a very personal view of the protagonist's feelings, and the combat dolls' shenanigans were so damned cute; I love love love those silly little kiddos.
Thank you for making this... it really cheered me right up. <3
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It can't be read in the browser because scrollbars are disabled. Would you be able to enable them please?
the browser embed is broken, but i was able to read it from downloading it. this was a WILD ride. like good lord. i do feel as though the ending was a bit abrupt, as well as the switch from the training camp to the twist, (although to be completely fair, the former can easily just be summed up to the format, so i suppose its just personal taste.) but overall this was very very lovely..... i loved the fluff/happy stuff lol, and n8 choosing her own name was so heartwarming...... n8 and her friends were so sweet..... very fucked up and tragic. also mb for deadnaming her i just dont wanna spoil ppl </3 you did the journal format very well!!!!!!! i hope her and her mistress can live a happy life.........
OH YEAH ALSO!!!!! was the book n53 was reading a reference to something specific? i assume not but i just remembered some book with a similiar premise i know about and its on the tip of my tongue but i CANNOT remember it. sorry if i sound insane. also n69 being the one moaning at night was so funny
playing in browser cuts off the bottom of the longer pages of text and I didn't find any controls to scroll down. enjoyed what I was able to read.
This was beautiful! The backgrounds were lovely and well-chosen, I thought you leveraged the epistolary format to give us a very personal view of the protagonist's feelings, and the combat dolls' shenanigans were so damned cute; I love love love those silly little kiddos.
Thank you for making this... it really cheered me right up. <3
Thank you so much!!!!!!